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Do you like my poem?

God took his plane in hope to achieve,
The thing that would save us all.
His task was to overcome the devil,
Who lurked on the ground bellow.

When the devil's evil targeted,
The sky they flew across.
Would his believers still believe,
They were safe in his hands.

It takes less than two buildings,
To bring God to his death.
it just takes you to say to him,
"I don't believe in you."

His people saw their fellow men,
Scattered dead across the floor.
They searched for God but where was he,
How could he be alive.

The devil laughed at his success,
He knew that he had won.
For as he saw the fiel of dead,
He knew God had died too.


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Awesome poem. That took alot of thought and imagation.

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