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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Could you please review this poem?Question: Could you please review this poem?All comments welcome! Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
good lines the first 3, but i don't find a cohesive connection between the images i receive as a group - they seem to be conflicting - somehow blue sky in the background, related to an image of fear and tragedy don't work together for me, although i get what you're trying to say. thas just my opinion. i would work on this some more - it has potential. |