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Question:
I wrote this poem and i would like some feed back?
Life and Death One Coming In One Coming Out
To my beloved twin sister Shawna Nicole. Rest in peace.
From the moment I took
My first breath of life I
Lose the only friend I know,
My identical twin.
Where am I? What is going on?
What is happening to me?
Where is my sister?
Where am I going?
People are poking at me,
What is this sticking in my hand?
I am scared out of my mind,
Why are you hurting me?
People are crying,
People are praying for me,
Why is everyone so sad?
Am I going to be alright?
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's straight from the heart ,genuine and terribly sad.