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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > I wrote a poem recently (very amature) tell me what you think be honest?Question: I wrote a poem recently (very amature) tell me what you think be honest?for one more day i want to get lost in your eyes Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
For your age, and that fact that you're probably only starting out writing, I'd say it's not bad. It's quite generic, cliched, nothing new. Nathan, just remember, the more you experience in life, and the longer you keep writing, the more you improve. The best of luck. |