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Question: What ya think of poem!.!?
Looking within
and feeling so much pain
a hearth
torn into a million pieces
as my hearth tries to beat
to see another day
finding withing to somehow
find my strength again
as i wonder finding a way out
to see if i can start again
powder my past memories
have been lost in the pain
as it rains hiding my tears of pain
catching my breath as
I start to live again
An open road
as my life begins
again with new
beginnings
and for my past it's
close road that
has come to an
END!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow thats goodWww@QuestionHome@Com
and i'll never go back,
on that path again,
i've closed that road,
as i've already said,
and no matter what,
i might still remember my past,
but i won't ever shed a tear,
'cause its over now!.
wow!
that really touched me!.!. we all have some dark secrets or some bad past!.!. what you've written is really cool!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
nice! i like the way you ended it!. it was a little fluffy, but other than that it was goodWww@QuestionHome@Com