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Question: A poem called Powder!? What will you say!?
Powder
By S!.F!. Reborn
Upon my arrival
At this lovely morning
Stretching!.!.!.
Yawning!.!.!.!.
Into existence
I glanced through frosted panes
At a wonder
I began to ponder!.!.!.!.
Was God putting on powder!?
So heavily it blanketed my street
Passing through clouds
Becoming devoid of heat
And taking on crystalline forms
Irrevocable design
Was it powder that fell from the sky!?
Or my overly active mind!?
Surely if God were to use talc
Wouldn't someone rightly know!?
So instead of God's Powder
Do we just call it snow!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Coming from you, God's powder sounds right!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I would have welcomed some snow formed in talc, We got a thick layer
of ice, near an inch, Don't know when I'll be able to leave the house,
one would need ice skates, and be able to skate, Salt is not causing
the ice to weep!.
Nonetheless, snow is a dangerous beauty of wonder, your poem is
a part of that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's either that or He is doing His laundry and the powder doesn't have any coloured boosting agents!.
Advanced Pun alert!.!.!.!.!.As I once wrote an advert for washing powder I used in a Xmas Radio Play)
'Why Shepherds wash their socks at night
nobody ever knows
Just how they keep their clothes so bright
Use "Glory" we suppose
Use "Glory" and it will be all white on the night"
Creative premise and well developed Semper! Light and cheerful!. Thanks for sharing your happy vibe!Www@QuestionHome@Com
God's powder is awfully cold today!. It has turned to ice!. I think it is just Nature's power instead!. Fascinating poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
stoned eyes
looking for icicles' heat
to wash or burn
the dust remained
powder of white
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Thanks for such an interesting talc - ha, ha!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is awesome!. Love the ponderance of God using talc! Good form!.
I guess we are stuck to call it snow, I woke up to ice inches thick and more pouring down!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Listen Brother, that sh** ain't powder! It's HEAVY! We've got a foot and of course the plow didn't come through until we were finished shoveling!
This is God's way of telling us to slow down!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
9 inches here today!. Do you want us to send you some!? Powdered sugar of course!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Cool concept!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
If you've ever skied
Park City in March!.!.!.
the stuff is definitely
God-sent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think he went a little overboard today!. We got nine inches too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i went outside to make sure!.
packed my armpits full!.
nope!. it wasnt!. BURRRRR!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Talcum powder, cause we're His babies!
Right!? Fun read, friend!
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Wonderful, isn't it!?
Glad us "Northerners" can share some of our wealth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com