HOW DO YOU FIND THIS POEM THAT I WROTE AT SCHOOL:
I ONCE WAS A CABBAGE,
AND MY COLOUR WAS TERACOTTA!.
I WHINED BEHIND THE PINE TREE,
AND IT NEVER TURNED PROPER!.
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I ONCE WAS A CABBAGE, AND MY COLOUR WAS TERACOTTA!. I WHINED BEHIND THE PINE TREE, AND IT NEVER TURNED PROPER!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like the cacophony in the first two linesWww@QuestionHome@Com It is O!.k but it is not deep enough to be a short poem!. Try and enlarge it, add a few verses!. Good LuckWww@QuestionHome@Com Lose the CAPS, it's not half bad,Www@QuestionHome@Com That is!.!.!.I don't know!. Can you explain it because I couldn't draw any understanding of it in my mind!!Www@QuestionHome@Com |