Why torment my heart!?
Is a dungeon not dark enough
for one to feed on memories that imitate misery!?
Who will hear the call of my heart
when the cell is closed, and it's key forgotten!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Is a dungeon not dark enough for one to feed on memories that imitate misery!? Who will hear the call of my heart when the cell is closed, and it's key forgotten!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like!. Maybe if you want to shorten further 'feed on memories that imitate misery' 'when cell is closed, key forgotten'Www@QuestionHome@Com I did not know of the torment of my heart shown!. She did me wrong!.Www@QuestionHome@Com only the lonelyWww@QuestionHome@Com This is real good!. Www@QuestionHome@Com uh!.!.!. how poetic!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Semper with very little!.!.!. you said much! Well done! Temari Www@QuestionHome@Com |