When the silent stretch of morning wakes us with blazing sun
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we crease our eyes and gaze the weary, awakening dawn!. Our reason to rise greets us at the crux of daybreak's past!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This is a serenade!.Www@QuestionHome@Com the morning sunlight warms this vast land of my wasted thoughts drawing her near rousing my senses!.!.!. keep walking she says nightmares by a sleep of cold nights once thought of hopeless breath glimmering at the edge of a silent glow!.!.!. a void lit fading echoes of once nostalgic teardrops washed away!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com the sun greats me with a new day!. i stretch my arms out to grab a cig the throne of life tells me to sit coffee in hand i walk to the fridge dang i learned something new today!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Its nearly 8 am , having a cup of coffee reading this!. But you know as half awake as i am i read form as the word from!. So you are still ok!.I didnt pay any attention to that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love this!. The complex and beautiful sentences paradoxically convey a simple concept!. The language and meaning are both lovely!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I haven't a clue what a fourteener is!.!.!.!. but this is a beautiful ode to morning!. Have more coffee, your typing may improve but the writing needs no improvement! maWww@QuestionHome@Com Makes me think how many beers did I have left out of that case I bought yesterday and where did I put them! Ha, you know i am kidding!.Www@QuestionHome@Com And a good morning to you too!. Hope your day is a good one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Won't enjoy the dawn for a couple more hours!. A little further north than you!. Good morning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com 'fourteener' is that like a nooner, but at two!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Well, it's interesting!. I would prefer six sevens!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like this!. Ha, I do it every day!. Very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com can i get coffee with thatWww@QuestionHome@Com My crux doesn't wait until daybreak to wake me!. You're lucky!Www@QuestionHome@Com Cool dude!.!.!. I'll wait the beat debate :) a -wake-ning or a - wake - n - ing My 'spresso is brewin' !.Www@QuestionHome@Com |