Don't you just love my poem?!$?

Question: Don't you just love my poem!?!$!?

ONLY FOR YOU

Only for you
I would sit here at bay
Only for you
Will my sun shine its rays
Only for you
Will I kneel down and pray
Only for you
Do I smile each day
Only for you
I will promise to stay
Only for you
my body will lay
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Don't listen to anyone!.!.!. This poem express your feelings!.!. Believe in it!.!. Keep writing!.!.!. I like poetry, it's so wonderful!.!.!. It enrich our feelings and helps us to smile, find a spark of assurance!.!.!.

Nice poem! Good luck to you, deedeegallmanWww@QuestionHome@Com

you're to cocky!. i hate my poetry but at least it doesn't suck as hard as yours does!.!.!.!.no offense!. its totally a prose and pretty boring!. try and use some more adverbs and have less structure when you write!. write what you feel not what rhymes and if you cant write what you feel then you're not a poet!. :]
-amandaWww@QuestionHome@Com

no, sorry, it sucks, and its not a poem, its just prose, the repetition is cliche and your way too cockyWww@QuestionHome@Com

No!.

It's not a poem!.

This is prose!.

Boring, and trite prose at that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We love this poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

its cuteWww@QuestionHome@Com