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Position:Home>Poetry> I wrote a poem, do you like it?Question: I wrote a poem, do you like it!? its very personal!. remember I'm only 12
Why cry son the outside In front of us Do you want to disturb And make a fuss!? When you can cry inside silently,slow and lose all emotions you don't have to show Do not cry any full blown tears when anger, sadness begin to leer We have kept it inside things we don't have to tell enough silent tears to fill up a well But now we cry silently, slow we lose all emotion we don't have to show what do ya think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: OMGosh!.!.!.You are only 12!? You are very talented! I absolutely loved it! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!.!.!.:) Keep up the writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com eh pretty abtsract!. Really emotional!. Good! I like poetry (all kinds)!. this is pretty sad!. you made me "feel" it inside lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i love it!.!.!. but maybe, wel li gues s i dont' know- in a way that is contrary to what i believeWww@QuestionHome@Com It's amazing!. I love it!. Great job!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com goodWww@QuestionHome@Com gr8 jobWww@QuestionHome@Com greatWww@QuestionHome@Com |