Please read and criticize this poem?

Question: Please read and criticize this poem!?

Growth is to humans is as
Maturation is to trees
We were once lost and without reason
Eventually our path was found and now everlasting
But what goes up must come down,
And life is like a golden eagle bird
Ever striking twice
And because that’s the way things are
I love you so

I'm only 12 so yeah!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

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very nice for a 12 year old, keep trying and you'll be an amazing poet when you get older!
i like the fact that you have proper spelling and grammar, it's hard to find even among the adults on here!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

For a 12yr old, you have great potential, well done!. There is nothing that I wish to criticize!. A lovely poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its good , but it has less u wrote less same sound words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com