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So for english we have to write poetry, worth 30% of our grade!. We have to write 3 poems, on any theme/idea, any structure, but they have to contain poetic/literary techniques!. So this is my poem:

Food is good for me to eat
Banana Banana Banana
Lets put the peel on the seat
Banana Banana Banana

Thats it Mary sit right there
Banana Banana Banana
Hope it dont get on what you wear
Banana Banana Banana

Mish Mash Mush oh no too late
Banana Banana Banana
Your skirts in a right state
Banana Banana Banana

Josh and Shaun pick a fight
Banana Banana Banana
And that peels still in sight
Banana Banana Banana

What a brawl will happen here
Banana Banana Banana
Josh punch shaun - oh oh dear
Banana Banana Banana

Look out Mary out the way
Banana Banana Banana
Someone will get a black eye today
Banana Banana Banana

Josh throws a punch quick now duck
Banana Banana Banana
Miss!. Combes almost says "Puck"
Banana Banana Banana

It hit Mary oh poor girl
Banana Banana Banana
She falls and lands in the peel
Banana Banana Banana

Slip and slide on that peel
Banana Banana Banana
On the skirt it starts to congeal
Banana Banana Banana

Miss Combes send Shaun and Josh out the room,
Banana Banana Banana,
Mary goes home cries in her room,
Banana Banana Banana

Pick it up and in the bin
Banana Banana Banana
Finally the monkey wins
Banana Banana Banana

What mark would you give it out of 20!? What percentage!? Please help!Www@QuestionHome@Com

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