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Position:Home>Poetry> Does this make me an oxy-moron?Question: Does this make me an oxy-moron!? So Right, It’s Wrong Dunces and dames, don't ever dance Jesters and queens, haven’t a chance Words of beauty, she releases I pen pain, from mental diseases I'm trying to start, my life anew She does as she, so desires to She claims to see, me without scar In her I see, the reasons that are Soured sad oil, with no way to bind Sweet flowing water, purity defined So I sit sadly, facing the sand She stands over, reaching her hand I shrug and think, whatever will be She smiles and says, it will with me ?rad091708 Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Uh, where's the 'moron' in 'oxy'!? Ain't none!. come back to the Light!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I thought I had learned the definition of oxy-moron,,, since this does not fit that definition,,, perhaps i was mistaken, though I strongly doubt it so no, neither you or the poem qualify under the definition I hold in my head depending on your point of view, that is either good or bad and only you can decide which is rightWww@QuestionHome@Com You are neither an oxy nor a moron!. You have a mind that travels down many roads You have the ability to believe in dreams You have the words to charm the maidens into believing!. You have the world at your feet!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Just one thing, you have the title backwards, it should be so wrong, it's right! A perfect example of opposites attract!. I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com It is a very 'right' poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Why drag the ox into it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com I like this one very much!. No oxy-moronic feeling here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com And another one! No morons around here!. Like it very very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |