Love Trigee
by C!.S!. Scotkin
A call………………Your voice
confirms…………!.!.!.speaks love
the date…………… so near
the wait…………… no fear
is short……………!.!. you’re here
you whispered……!. my love!.
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by C!.S!. Scotkin A call………………Your voice confirms…………!.!.!.speaks love the date…………… so near the wait…………… no fear is short……………!.!. you’re here you whispered……!. my love!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I have been in tears most of this evening!. No particular reason for it, just missing my boy!. This is WONDERFUL! Thank you, fellow M!.o!.M!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I thought the standard was fourteen words, But I like your construction, the two verses and their interplay!. It's a very good write! Love returns with breathless hope!.Www@QuestionHome@Com stupid!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.retarded constipated!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.stupid thoughts bugs!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.this is a stupid poem you wrote!.!.!.!.!.!.I critiqued Www@QuestionHome@Com It's short and sweet!. Good job!. I've yet to post a trigee!. I think I'm afraid of messing it all up!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com Fabulous!. Thank you, Reenie for inspiring C!.S!. I really like this form of poem!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Nice clean cut!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Ya did good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |