Evening Trigee
by C!.S!. Scotkin
Quiet evening……………!.Howling hot sun
falls at last………………!.!.goes down,
but does not break………!.!.sweet silence!.
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by C!.S!. Scotkin Quiet evening……………!.Howling hot sun falls at last………………!.!.goes down, but does not break………!.!.sweet silence!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Incredible!. I especially like the 'does not break' bit; it's eloquent and fantastically poetic but is also concise and quick!. It touches the essence of what we strive towards in poetry-- something small and soft that is beautiful but does not ask to be loved!. Anyway, amazing poem!. Write often; there is a deficit of decent poets in this world, and clearly you have a future in writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's Trigee mania! Great Trigee to honor the close of day; and in the spirit of contagion that has infected Y!A this evening, let me say: At dusk heads bow!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.We close our eyes And deep we sigh!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.For now at last The day is done!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.The battle's won!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm with BL on this one but with a tot (or 2) of brandy to warm the cockles of my heart on this very antarctically chilly evening in the South of the globe!. Morning one and y'alls Www@QuestionHome@Com One of these days I will try one of these, not sure how it would turn out!. I like it, very visual, reminds me of where I am living!. I enjoyed it I have work up and your opinion is always welcomed and valuedWww@QuestionHome@Com Noisy evening!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.so much fun boozy breezes,!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.wonderful smells blowing in!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.blowing through You like quiet, I take noisy, together is that a downer/upper!? lol Trigee nice!Www@QuestionHome@Com Your quiet evening Trigee speaks volumes! Wonderful!Www@QuestionHome@Com A great Trigee-----you did write Tells a story-------about the night You can feel-------the sweet silence!. Loved itWww@QuestionHome@Com Sunset and your Trigee, perfect combo!. Bayard Lady, I'll have a glass of wine if you please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Indeed I do! Raising my wine stem in tribute!. (Now, see!.!.!.it was not that painful!)Www@QuestionHome@Com |