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Question: No style, no form, no problem!?
A green beetle, the kind
that shines and makes you look!.
I want to be
that
when I die!.
I ain't scared of poop and weeds
just old leather boots
with quick and clumsy feet inside!.
I want to be
fast, too
when I die!.
I'll never know
the weather or whether
it matters
until it falls
on my back
when I die!.
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Me thinks it takes a very gifted poet to get away with no style, no form
with no problem and not die in the process!.
You are one!.
ma
(I hear you!)Www@QuestionHome@Com
unfortunately you have put the pause breaks in the wrong places, allow me to fix it!.
A green beetle, the kind
that shines and makes you
look!. I want
to be that when I
die!.
I ain't scared
of
poop and weeds
just old leather
boots with quick
and clumsy feet
inside!.
I want to
be fast, too
when I
die!.
I'll never
know the weather
or whether
it
matters until
it
falls on my back
when I
die!.
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!.!.!.no style!.!.no form!.!.no problem!.it has all more than that the meaning-the under lying thought!.excellent!.it is cool and thought fullWww@QuestionHome@Com
A regular Josef Stalin in your poetic style!. Very niceWww@QuestionHome@Com
I would be honored if you eat the aphids off my roses!. I'll even switch to organic productsWww@QuestionHome@Com
What do they do with beetles when they die!? Are you sure you have thought this one out!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I want to be a dung beetle!. At least they never go hungry!. Although, every night it is the same old shitt at dinner time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I want to be a god when I die!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds a bit like a June bug all shiny green like that,I almost miss those big bu***rs!.Thanks kindly a real nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm nobody , an audience and I liked itWww@QuestionHome@Com
I think there is a problem with
this poem!.!.!.Its funny I guess!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You need one of those Medic-alerts! You know! "I've fallen and I can't get up!"Www@QuestionHome@Com
Boy ain't that the truth!. Love honeyWww@QuestionHome@Com
a green beetle is the best!. they are very prettyWww@QuestionHome@Com
With all the sh*t on here, you would never go hungryWww@QuestionHome@Com
we all need to aspire to something, but a dung beetle!? Guess it takes all kinds to make this an interesting planet!Www@QuestionHome@Com
i'm starting to get concerned with your poetry about dying lately!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This will go down in history as the first "question" I star but don't answer!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Include me in your will please!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
the most original poem on yahoo answers yet
pretty good i guessWww@QuestionHome@Com
now i want to die!Www@QuestionHome@Com
very cool !.!.
but I still want to be a cat!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com