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Position:Home>Poetry> Will we go round in circles?Question: Will we go round in circles!? Look Up Staring at the base of the wall Awed by the task that lay ahead In my mind it looked so small Now I’m struck with fear and dread I knew it was something that I could do My plan was so neatly laid Or did I bite more than I could chew What was this choice that I made A simple life with a simple plan It was an easy choice for me For I thought I was a simple man How wrong could I possibly be Like all people I had thoughts and dreams Wondrous words marched through my head Dragged myself through my plots and schemes Not unscathed but still not dead I wonder if I’ll pass this test Will I know if I succeed How do I try and judge my success Is it measured in how much I bleed ?rad042202 Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: wow thats a good poem!!!! did u make it up by urself if u did bravo!!! Www@QuestionHome@Com The wall is not so daunting nor the path ahead put your best foot forward in an even steady tread!. Simplicity in Essenes is not what it might seem especially when the words fall out in a steady stream The best made plans are often not the ones that lead us or direct the plot!. The test you passed You did succeed So surely you Don't have to bleed!. !.!.could not resist the words coming casually to my fingertips as my creative juices have been quite minimal of late!. I enjoy your poem very much Www@QuestionHome@Com Life is never simple, Nor was it meant to be, For there are many hurdles Of which you will agree!. Each one a little higher as we pass along Lifes way, At times we feel like turning back but know thats not the way!. So struggle on Is what we do, In our search for survival!. And when we know, We've done our best Tis then we know we've passed the test, And are no longer, Liable!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Simple words, stated simply, but carrying a message deep!. No, I predict you will go straight ahead, full steam matey!.!.!.!.!.no more circles for you! Keep taking the spinach supplements Popeye! Strong man of letters!. (that was letters, not lettuce!) Www@QuestionHome@Com Isn't that the eternal question!? How do you write of passion, love, danger, horror without a little experience, even if it is vicarious!. And HP, you were never a simple man!.!.!.hee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com well : it is simple Poetry that has been written of course I know one you would read from Arts & Humanities best Pomes By Robert Frost yes he wrote alot as a Author Www@QuestionHome@Com niceWww@QuestionHome@Com |