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Question: Do you like the poem i wrote
my heart is so frozen
so stiff,
not even the warmest hug
can melt my frozen heart
nore a fires strongest rays
for you see you are the sun
that melts my frozen heart and
sets me free from this icy chamber
and carry me to your heart
witch is the warmest place to keep me
ok hope you liked it :)
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its nice
but saddWww@QuestionHome@Com
Yea, its pretty poetic, really gud!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Not good enough!.No offense but you need lots of practice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
yeah it's good but just with a little rhyming would be perfect!Www@QuestionHome@Com
its ok but trying adding some rhymingWww@QuestionHome@Com
What a load of ****! HAHAAA!Www@QuestionHome@Com
good startt =]]]]
i liked itWww@QuestionHome@Com