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Question: Just the beginning, what do you think!?
Shorter than me but taller enough to reach my heart, left your fingerprints all over it, Your now in control complete control of it, They now replace the hundreds of millions scars, Wouldn't mind taking a vacation from all of this, with you to the most distant of stars, While watching a planet being birth, I love my Astronaut Boyfriend written across the chest of your shirt
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very nice, but you didn't hit enter after some of the lines, it should of been posted like this:
Shorter than me but taller enough to reach my heart,
left your fingerprints all over it,
Your now in control, complete control of it,
They now replace the hundreds of millions scars,
Wouldn't mind taking a vacation from all of this,
with you to the most distant of stars,
While watching a planet being birth,
I love my Astronaut Boyfriend written across the chest of your shirt
on that last line, try:
!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Boyfriend written across the chest of your heart
other then that, you have a great poem to finish,
good luck!!!
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