If I were a bird
I'd fly
A fish
I'd swim
A centipede
I'd walk
To you, my love
yet you are in the room
still
you get the idea!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I'd fly A fish I'd swim A centipede I'd walk To you, my love yet you are in the room still you get the idea!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: If it's supposed to be funny then that's good, you've succeeded!. If not then that's not good, you've unsucceeded!. Either way, a masterpiece of poetry and as a result of its brilliance I think I might be in heart with you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I've got a similar one you can have it if it helps!. If i was a bird i would fly so high, I would stretch my wings and reach for the sky, If i were a dolphin i would swim in the sea, I would swim so fast that your love couldn't catch me, But oh no,you're love knows the way to go, now i can see,the futures you and me !.Www@QuestionHome@Com im a lad and poems are good they help you if your sad or alone in the dark of nigh or in the day poems are nice like a new friend or a new pet !. im not good with nice poems im good with sad ones but i think you can become really good just take it one step at a time and im sure youl make a great love poems you just need to find somthing you feel strongly anout thats the secrete of a good poem !. hop it helps you and keep up the good work^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com I like love poems!. I like your poem, too!. All are directed toward your love!. But I don't like the centipede!. I 'm afraid of it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com this is not a love poem!. sorry,but just keep doing what you do and i hope you do better next time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Silly, and isn't even considered a 'love' poem!.!.!. It's not very original either!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com How very silly and unromantic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Its not very original!. Try and be more creative!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not bad, but it needs work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com maybe he just hates thisWww@QuestionHome@Com its okay if u work on it a little bet more it should be goodWww@QuestionHome@Com I don't get it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com ha ha ****** ha you are kiddin me right this is a jokeWww@QuestionHome@Com |