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Please read this one...it's one of my first poems i had ever written?
actually, it's my third poem. i posted it a long time ago but didn't get many reviews. here you go....
title-pirates
yo, ho, ho and a bottle of rum,
i'm drinking it, but don't tell my mum,
i'm a pirate, you are too,
i steal gold, yes, that is what i do!
yo, ho, ho and a bottle of rum,
i'm not very smart, no, i'm just dum,
i sail around, on my ship,
i fell twice, and dislocated my hip.
yo, ho, ho and a bottle of rum,
"a pirates life for me" is what i hum,
strong men fighting, having a drink,
have to be careful or our ship will sink!
yo, ho, ho and a bottle of rum,
87, on the ship,yes, that is the sum,
late at night, time for sleep,
don't plan a mutiney, or your in for a leap.
Additional Details1 week ago
FYI! it's supposed to be fun to read. cut the criticism for a few minutes and enjoy.
1 week ago
and yes it is mine.
1 week ago
and yes it could be like a song or something.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
1 week agoFYI! it's supposed to be fun to read. cut the criticism for a few minutes and enjoy.