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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > What do you think of my poem?Question: What do you think of my poem?A couple cling to one another, Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your main character has no spine, and she's already dead in the first verse. Not much development in character imagery. She wouldn't have made a good mother anyway, cause she couldn't make a decision and stick by it, such as loose the fetus. Sadness or victory? Isn't her final jump a victory over her own insecurities and fear? At least symbolical? Or does it show her crying weakness that makes me happy she's not a mother growing another unstable person with potential to be a menace to society? These points are not very clear, nice words, but it doesn't really say anything! Except I don't like abortion, could've just said that!! |