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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > Please comment on this poem, your comments will be appreciated. Thank you?Question: Please comment on this poem, your comments will be appreciated. Thank you?He spinkled fairy dust upon her soul 6 months ago 6 months ago Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Not as good as the last, but still a bit melancholy. Poetry doesn't always have to be about sadness. I don't like some of the words used in the poem, the poem itself is good. You could try rephrasing it thought. You talk about her and then I, kinda makes it a bit confusing. Try this, it's not great but it's what I think would make it a bit better. |