Question:
What do you think about my poem?
This is for you, Baby
My poor, lonely heart is so broken
Everyday no matter I do, I feel so sad.
We lost all communication
I just long for you so bad.
There's not one day I go without thinking of you
A lot of songs, especially love songs now make me cry.
I would love to see you again
But this time I never want to say, Goodbye.
I can't help but stare so long
At people who look and remind me of you.
Even when I have flashbacks, dreams, or even daydreams
I feel really disappointed 'cause I want them all to be true.
I love you so much
And I know you already know that.
Every time when I send you letters
I wait anxiously by the mail to get a respond back.
Sometimes I fear the worse of the worse
That you're out there in danger or probably even dead.
I know you believe in the lord
So if He ever decides to take you, I want to be taken instead.
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
no. it sucks. sorry.