Question:
Poem.........?
As i walk down the long dark hallway
Chills go down my spine
Mysterious figures watching my every move
I try to run but they enter my body
Taking complete controll over me
i fall to the floor and bleed to death
What do you think of this poem? and be honest please.
Additional Details6 months ago
Im not sure about the last part after the taking contol part..if you have any other endings plzz tell me!!
6 months ago
im not dark im like preppy ...i love life i just wrote that for funn...
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i love this poem. you should turn this poem into a song and give to to evanesence to sing.