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Position:Home>General - Arts & Humanities > What do you think about this poem?????Question: What do you think about this poem?????hes the most beautiful garden Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Ive read alot of poetry on this q&a and most of it is horrid. I really like this one. Its very deep and has emotions splattered all over it. I like your style and the way that you put it all out there but hid it in "the garden". You have some tallent and I think you should consider doing more with it. Use a little puncuation because that will help you to break the poem up a bit and give it that extra kick you are looking to show. I love the line "I understand the way I water his love" thats a great line and you have so many hidden meanings here. I would love to see more of your work. I think that you may get some negative feedback on this one because I think it may go right over some peoples heads but dont listen to them this poem is good. |