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by Sydney A vision of a Poet’s Hell Oh so dark a black hole is drawing me into its huge maw pulling my sore body causing me eternal pain in cold dark seventh ring of Hell!. I scream mindless, writhing agony abandoned here without a pen to write!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: That's awesome!. I love poems with shapes!. And that would be a hell needing to write and having no pen!. To express with no outlet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I have been in that hole a few weeks now but I have my pen I have my paper too!. The gravity is too strong for words to make it out to you!. So here I sit in my own nightmare I can't even sit in my own old rocking chair!.Www@QuestionHome@Com LOL!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.at the last line, due to the dramatic introduction!. Although, I can relate, as well to without a mix of other items that need each other to make a whole!. Very good!Www@QuestionHome@Com Excellent!. It doesn't seem like you, but it does describe very well the frustration writers feel when they have everything but inspiration!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Writers block!? Interesting form, the Etheree!. It requires discipline!. This seems a good one to me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I have been inspired!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I enjoy reading these!. Nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A fine example you are!. Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com Wow! I learned something new today!. This is awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com What a vision you paint! I bow in respect!Www@QuestionHome@Com |