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Question: Is my poem a good poem on the scale of 1-10!?
Selena
I woke up this morning
With the intention of you
That is in my head
And rule my heart
If was a king
You'd be my queen
If I was rich
We could have a big mansion
And spoil our kids
With gifts everyday
You a star
Me a film maker
I know you life I so great
And that you might not know me
But let's take a chance
And do new things of the odd
Your im Burbank
I'm in new york
We are from different places
But who said we can't be
Together
Selena I love you
And like you
You are beautyful
Like a rose in a bush
Or a angel in the sky
You don't have wings
But you make me rise high
Selena I love you
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is good!. Sounds like you are in love or your really missing your love !Www@QuestionHome@Com
Um I'd give it a 2or3!.!.
Not to be harsh, but it didn't have any rhythm, or flow to it!. This poem was also lacking in direction!. Sorry, but it just wasn't good!. Thats only my opinion however!. I bet there is going to be at least one person who will tell you it's amazing (even if they only do it to get best answer), but honestly I wasn't impressed!. Keep trying you have potential!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com
1!. Yeah, it's pretty bad!. Sorry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
sorry start overWww@QuestionHome@Com
Not being rude, but 3!. Its pretty sappy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
1!. sorry that was dumbWww@QuestionHome@Com