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Question: Is this a Sweet Poem!?
Last night
I watched a teardrop
slowly trace its way
across your lovely
cheek!.
It hovered a moment
at the tip of your nose
as if to tease me
and make me feel ashamed
for hurting you so badly!.
Finally it broke itself free
and came to a rest
on your soft pillow
to join countless others
of its kind that I
never knew existed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I love your wonderful poem,I will kiss all your tears away!.I promise to cherish,and love you!.I will hold you closely and never let you go!.My strong arms will hold you forever!.I love your gentle touch!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice!.!.!.very nice!.!.!.I felt that way last night!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com