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My Infatuation:


I swear by the morning dusk,
By the dying moon and the rising sun:
I’ve never had these feelings before for anyone!.
These vibes they’re new,
They’re real,
And there’s nothing of me left concealed,
Because I give my all to you,
I perish, I surrender;
I’m vanquished but I’m yours forever!.
I get arrested by your inner beauty,
I come undone by your mind’s serenity!.
Tears flood down my face,
Like drains flowing!.

I’m down on my knees,
I beg to you with arms wide open,
Please don’t forsake me,
Just listen to my pleas!.
I’d die a thousand deaths for you having a look at me,
I’d illuminate a million candles if you’d say your smiles were meant for me,
I’d go through countless chambers to find you,
for finding you was my biggest dream!.

The light in your eyes reflect the beauty of your soul,
The light in your eyes dances mischievously,
Your lips curl up in a smile,
Looking at others devilishly,
But the sad part is that none of these things were meant for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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