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"Ocean"
The water glitters
Reflecting the gold sun
It explodes into unknown colors
Camouflaging the creatures within
Into the great blue abyss they glide
As quiet as a murmer
They soar through the coral
Flecks of yellow and orange
Scatter every which way
Dancing and twirling colors
A large white body
Curious as a puppy
Stares with his stone black eyes
And stealthily glides
Trillions of hand-crafted shells
Ocean-brushed to perfect their exquisite beauty
Ripple with the tide
Journeying to shore
The sun breaks through the waves
Illuminatng a world of magic
A wonderland of water and salt
Of fin and gill
Man and ocean
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