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Question: Martin Luther King Jr!. PLEASE HELP!!!!?
ok so i have to write a poem
can you please help me!?!?!?

Here's how it starts:
A man with a dream
Impossible it seemed
He fought for it day by day
Even though blacks had no say
In and out of jail
But it seemed he could never fail
They tried to bomb him


that's where i stopped!.!.
Do you think it's good or bad!?
what rhymes with bomb!?
also please suggest what you think i should put in hereWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
First off, your poem is very good!
After 'they tried to bomb him' you could say 'yet he continued to stay calm,' or something like that!.
How long do you want it to be!?
After that, you could write "He knew violence wasn't the way, and he never went astray He wanted peace for all, no matter how big or small Equality was his goal, no matter what it's toll And up until the end, he continued to mend His dream was for balcks and whites to walk hand-in-hand, and now, everday, that love is spread through the land!." Well, it's just some ideas!. Good luck!!! :-DWww@QuestionHome@Com

They tried to bring him down, (instead of bomb)
But he prevailed,

Although he cannot see,
the wonders he has done,
He looks upon his brothers and sisters,
A smile upon his lips!.
For even though they tried to bring him down,
He,
Prevailed!.


Hope this helps!!!! good luck! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com