This is my 2nd poem, like ever!.!.!.!.I put one on here before and was given some advice I have tried to use it and would like some opinions on my 2nd one please!? thank you
OLIVIA
When u entered my life
I didn't know how to feel!.
Mixed emotions, tired - exhausted!.
Nothing felt real!.
Then when it was you and me
In the hospital bed,
you opened your big blue eyes
and turned you little head!.
What a wondrous sight you were,
for me to finally see
I felt warm and fuzzy feelings,
whirling inside of me!.
Watching you feeding!.
Changing your first nappy!.
Kissing your cute little nose,
makes me so truly happy!.
Then we went home,
you daddy and me!.
Back to our "nest"
to be a family!.
Watching you grow,
has been the honor of my life!.
You are my world Olivia
and could never cause me strife!.
I am here for you my baby,
with every part of my being!.
For you my little girl,
are my very reason for living!.
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