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Question: My POEM tell me what you think!? PLEASE !?
The Shadow:
There is a shadow on the wall
I sit and stare all day long
It grows and grows till it splits to two
I really dont know what to do
My heart is racing
My mind is blowing
There is no tell which way its going
My mind is split
Up is down
Right is Left
My world is crashing all around
Thunder lighting
Its a storm
I'm so cold yet so warm
Its so quiet and I'm so alone
I wish I could just go home
But I know I'm stuck
Nowhere left to turn
So I guess I'll sit here and burn
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's not bad!. It lacks form a bit!. The words you use are very simple and sometimes repetative!. It could be a bit more creative!. But a solid start!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful really!.!.Wow *_* very nice you are talented :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
You should make this your profession!. It's really very goodWww@QuestionHome@Com
Its great yoWww@QuestionHome@Com
really good poem - ^_^ Loved it!! <3Www@QuestionHome@Com
luv itWww@QuestionHome@Com