Winds breath wafts smoothly
Caresses soft and gentle
Transcends me smoothly
Attentively virulent
Hauntingly mellifluous
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Caresses soft and gentle Transcends me smoothly Attentively virulent Hauntingly mellifluous Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Could you do me a favour please and rearrange this into an acrostic poem!? I see the word WATCH wanting to happen here and I my brain wants to process that!. Just a matter ofswapping the C and A lines which have the same syllable count!. OMG am I becoming OCD!? Good stuff! Www@QuestionHome@Com As I read it a few weeks ago, the requirements for a Tanka are; A syllable count 5, 7, 5, 7, 7, It should be about the sea /sky!. No rhyme scheme required Imagery is the key!. You have the syllable count but I'm not entirely sure about the subject, although if you enjoy the piece who really cares!?Www@QuestionHome@Com It is the correct syllable count, if that is what you mean!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Sounds right to me!. Keep at it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com noWww@QuestionHome@Com |