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Question: I wrote a poem, do you like it!?
its very personal!. remember I'm only 12
Why cry son the outside
In front of us
Do you want to disturb
And make a fuss!?
When you can cry inside
silently,slow
and lose all emotions
you don't have to show
Do not cry any
full blown tears
when anger, sadness
begin to leer
We have kept it inside
things we don't have to tell
enough silent tears
to fill up a well
But now we cry
silently, slow
we lose all emotion
we don't have to show
what do ya think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
OMGosh!.!.!.You are only 12!? You are very talented! I absolutely loved it! Thanks so much for sharing it with us!.!.!.:) Keep up the writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
eh pretty abtsract!. Really emotional!. Good! I like poetry (all kinds)!.
this is pretty sad!. you made me "feel" it inside lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i love it!.!.!.
but maybe, wel li gues s i dont' know- in a way that is contrary to what i believeWww@QuestionHome@Com
It's amazing!. I love it!. Great job!. ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com
goodWww@QuestionHome@Com
gr8 jobWww@QuestionHome@Com
greatWww@QuestionHome@Com