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Question: A poem about my brother!.!.!.what do you think!?
Forever the same in my mind you'll be
Now only in a photograph for my eyes to see
I weep for you with a grief thats strong
I can't believe your really gone
My heart aches and my soul grieves
Did you really mean to leave!?
I see you everywhere I look Until I'm blinded by tears
Now I'm living through my darkest fears
Everyone hurts its to much to bear
I need to know how could you do this!? Didn't you care!?
Time heals all wounds, I don't believe its true
I will never be over you
You were a piece to us all!. Now we're left undone
by you our Mothers only Son
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This poem is a beautiful way to memorialize your brother, it shows a lot of love!. He is probably in heaven giving you a thumbs up!. God bless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It wakes up sadness in me, meaning it addresses emotions!. I am sorry for you and your family and send you blessings!.
This poem is very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I felt the words of this poem
I don't want to over rate it
And I can't stand in your shoes
But I thought this poem was great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
that is really sweet in a sad way,
how did you come up with it!.!.
i dont know how i would come up with something like that!.
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awsome Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow thats awesome! i could really tell what it was about Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's great!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
it is really really great i think
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