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Position:Home>Poetry> Will you comment on the poem about a phone call?Question: Will you comment on the poem about a phone call!? Bedtime Call by C!.S!. Scotkin I was startled out of a reverie looking up a word!. Your special ringtone Le nozze di Figaro heralded our bedtime call!. Hello! I drank your voice deeply, this thirst that had built on the heat of my day!. “You liked your poem!?” I asked, teasing… “Still licking the sugar off my fingers”, you said!. Lovers conversation we spoke little, laughed much breathing love and silliness into each others ears, still moonstruck adolescents with far sighted eyes!. “I miss you so much!” We said in one voice, “No one ever wrote me a poem before" your tenor cracked into bass… !. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: This made me think of a woman clad in black, half lying half sitting up on a bed in a warm coloured room, sipping a glass of red wine in a formal black dress!. Classy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sweet nothings have always been spoken into the ears of lovers, whether by phone, or snuggled together in the front seat of a 56 oldsmobile on lover's lane!. Words spoken are for the most part, inconsequential!. The important part is the speaking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not the same sugar frosting that neonman speaks of!? Hm - the plot thickens (another thought - are you cradle-snatching!?) I'm not saying anything!.!.!.you do whatever makes you happy (said granny smiling indulgently over her glasses)!.!.!.Lovely, lovely poem!.!.!.!.as usual!. (I drank your voice!.!.!.great)Www@QuestionHome@Com Is it hot in here, or is it just me!.!.!.!.!.!? CS This sizzles (especially V2)! *blush!. Hubba hubba!. Double Hubba Hubba in fact!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Isn't virtual and telephone love great!?Www@QuestionHome@Com If this is phone sex, I will sign up! lol Great ending!.Www@QuestionHome@Com That would be the Hotline I assume!? Always trust your bass instincts!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This type of sex triggers Insomnia, because its phoney!.!. That is why I resort to unplugging!. Nice read! Www@QuestionHome@Com Phone sex!.!.!. if so!.!. its niceWww@QuestionHome@Com Great!. I see Cherubino on the phone downstairs and the maid listening in!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com My tenor gets cracked about once a month!Www@QuestionHome@Com |