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Question: Can poetic words "fly"!? !?
(inspired offshoot from one of Buk's poems)
Scenes from a Butterfly Collection
by Jellz Fisher 081003
Butterfly words,
flitter flutter across ,
blank spaces!.
Spreading beauty
in each moment!.
Unformed words
once lay
cocooned in minds,
providing safe haven,
hibernation,
until the time is right
Bursting free
into the air!
Colour full!
Vibrant and liberating!
Reborn, reformed!
Blessing the world!
Flying, falling, free!.
Silently capturing
reader’s feelings
and imaginings,
…in their own fragile nets
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Fireflies and butterflies!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
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The imagery in this is lovely!.!.!.ain't words great!? We can do whatever we like with them, we can spot-light the tiny butterfly and use its image to convey the wondrous delight that poets can weave with words!.!.!.as you do so well here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great metaphor for how a poem is created!. Words hibernating, cocooned, developing until birth, bursting free, finally flying!. I like this very much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
And that's exactly what words do! Good poem here, Jellz!!! Our minds never forget, then the inspiration hits and, the butterfly of poetry flies free!!!
Let this be forever! No 'bought, ready-made' poetry!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Jellz, this is really wonderful! You really put into beauty the whole writing process!. The flow of you poem is smooth like glass and sounds great read aloud! And welcome back!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I've captured this poem in my fragile net, admiring its beauty and wisdom!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very good!.!.!.
Poetry is "personal" and when it resonates with many!.!.!.you have truly made a "personal connection" with a few!.!.!.
"Gong!"Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice!. I'm collecting (downloading) most of the "how to" "what is" poetry poems I see on this site!. Helps me think!.
EDIT: Just my personal use!.!.!. like study tools!. Tks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Butterfly, that's right
My page, a Large White!.
Hardly even, a Comma
Must find, a Gatekeeper
To free the MonarchWww@QuestionHome@Com
I return to you what you once gave me!.!.!.!.!.!. your metaphor for how a poem is created is Devinne!.!.!.your imagery does indeed fly!. bravo!Www@QuestionHome@Com
The miracle of words in a few sentences!.
Your poem is beautiful!.!.!.I love it!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Great metaphor!. It looks like you caught some here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful! Yes, words do fly!.!.!.and they fly hight!.
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