Here
I've brought
a gun
to start
a war!.
I
have lost
what was
worth fighting
for!.
Love
taught me
to shoot
first when
outdrawn!.
They
were words
but to her
it was too
real!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I've brought a gun to start a war!. I have lost what was worth fighting for!. Love taught me to shoot first when outdrawn!. They were words but to her it was too real!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: The last stanza is a real letdown, as you are waiting for a rhyme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is different but i like it!., Keep on writing!. Peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |