I'm very new to this Con-verb thing, and I want to make sure I got it right!. I would appreciate feedback!. Thanks!.
Daddy
Bite your lip
Hold back your tears
And wait
For him to finishWww@QuestionHome@Com
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Daddy Bite your lip Hold back your tears And wait For him to finishWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Granny is right!. A Con-verb should be more direct!. This is more like a good poem!. The flagship Con-verb, CV-1, goes like this: Tobacco Became the bad guy When John Wayne Got lung cancer!. They are meant to be wisdom in reverse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think TD invented the Converb for light subjects This is very sad, since I suspect it refers to child-molestation, I may be wrong, it may just be making the child wait until the Daddy has finished speaking, but I suspect not (I'm not an expert - I've starred this, hopefully Elaine Polin or TD will pick up on it and give you the definition)Www@QuestionHome@Com Here are some I posted a while back!. Yours fits, sadly, but fits!. If it only takes one to kill then please tell why you need an Uzi!? Politicians… always indignant when not in power Tattoos… vivid memories of stupid times Honey, I’m pregnant Rejoice… we just spent $400K If it’s a golden age then why am I still searching for gold!? If gray hair means wisdom than why can’t I find my keys!? Celebrate the Fourth of July Be patriotic…be American! Enjoy the fireworks… they’re from ChinaWww@QuestionHome@Com The Con-verb, as its inventor states is "a contrary proverb!." It should involve some kind of controversy!. No one can argue about this one!. Keep trying, you will master the form!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best I've read today!. Conveys a strong emotion in very few words!. Not sure about the converb thing - but really your poem is good so who cares what pattern it follows !?Www@QuestionHome@Com Sounds like me at a Karaoke bar!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |