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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you do when you see it happen right before your eyes?Question: What do you do when you see it happen right before your eyes!? Flight 61 --Moscow When I saw you smile At the little child In line!.!.!.Somehow You remind Me!.!.!.Of the magic Albeit tragic That you possess Yes, I confess It's best I let go But I thought you should know I felt it My heart melted As the little child in you Broke through and Showed the beauty Who you are ?rad080308Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Lovely sentimental recollection in poetic form!. Excellent work!.!.!.great use of rhyme and descriptive language!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This poem brought back a memory from 9 years ago!. I had this really tough friend; She was so tough she fought with boys, and she was a good fighter!. (we were 18 at that time) Alot of people feared her, and one day (when I use to smoke pot) I saw the kid in her!. I saw that broken child, the soft feminine girl in her, and it broke my heart!. I always have this gift; the gift to find a way to see through a person!. Anyway I never told her, but it was her inner broken spirit, that made her seem so tough on the out! Anyway Hydro, I agree with the others, you have a way with all of us on here; with your words you pool things from within us!. And we relate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Hydro, T'is you who have the magic, Every word,so lovingly penned, You truly know how to amend, All thats Dark within our thoughts, Words you write, From the heart, You will always be a part, Of me!. In things you see, That I see!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The ideas that you see and pen are truly a wonderful gift!. You found a new way to echo and show the wonders of a mystery within a mystery!. Wonderfully written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com The child in me the child in you is seen, each time we take the time to look and see!. Kudos! Hydro, this one is a heart melter, purity!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is simply marvellous!. I was there looking over your shoulder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You done well here!. You many now go to first class!. Oh wait!.!.!.where's the pilot!? My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It is difficult to make me feel amazement or wonder at a poem!. You have done so this time!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Priviet!.!.!. This is greatness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com transformation, even transfiguration by a smile!. my heart melts as well!. Thank you so much!Www@QuestionHome@Com Excellent! We've all had those magical moments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |