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Question: El, this ones for you!.!.!.!.poem!.lyric!.!.!.out of 10!?
So many dreams of you and me
Painting a picture of something to see
The ship of my heart sails the darkest seas
Your eye that always glances but never sees
Oh, walk me down the path again
Avoid the path that leads to pain
I will love you forever more
But until that day, my lost soul is still at war!.

Let me tell you El, it's been to long,
Since I've had the time to sing along!.
Let me tell you that it's just begun,
The war inside that can't be won!.

So many times I've had to be,
The hanging photo that you can't see
You love to look but you never touch,
My heart is losing it's own self control!.
As the ship set it's sails north,
I will let it go out my back door!.
And I will walk the only path i know,
And I hope it doesn't cross your road!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
wow this put a tear in my eye it is lovelyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!. The first 6 lines flow amazingly!. Great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think its awesome and sweetWww@QuestionHome@Com

i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com