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Question: Will you please tell me what you think of my poem that i wrote!?
The Last Summer
By: Jordyn

was the
last summer!.
This was the
last time that
I could spend!.
I didn’t know!.
I didn’t know what would occur
in just 365 days…
I was clueless!.

We went to Florida together!.
We spent
loved each other!.
You where my pride!.
My joy!.
My life!.

don’t know why!.
You say
that you will tell me
I get old enough!.
not good enough!.
I love you!.
So why can’t you tell!?

was my last time!.
Last time I could
call out your names
at the same time!.
The words
“Mom & Dad”
be said in the same sentence again…
this was the last summer!.

*i wrote this about my parrents devorce!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow! That was beautiful! You almost made me cry! I love it! It was the best poem I've heard in my life! That was so describing too!.!.!. I could picture it and that's what poems are all about! Good Job! If I had to rank you 1-50, I would give you 50! Thanks so much for making that poem!. It really made my day!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its very discribing!.!! GreatWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's so sad!.!.but i like it :(Www@QuestionHome@Com