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Question: What do you think of my thingamajig poem/Ku!?!?!?/!?!?!?!?
TD if your viewing this can you tell me if they are American Haiku, Ku or thingamajig!?

eclyptic sun reigns,
shaddow cast on winter dunes,
Silky red flag flys!.

radiant sun shines,
bees bounce between spring flowers
suculent honeyWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Not only are they covered by the larger umbrella* of "thingamjig," they are very much included within the Japanese concept of "Haiku!." It is not merely the 5-7-5 syllable count that is required, they must deal with some aspect of Nature!.

*If you have difficulty creating a metaphor, let a simile be your umbrella!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A beautiful picture has been painted!! Well done ! Cheers !! Love it !!Www@QuestionHome@Com