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104th Birthday
by C!.S!. Scotkin

At the party
he is asked
what is the secret
of such a long life!.

Back bent by
so much
his eyes are
July 4th

“I never did practice stoppin’ breathin’,
I expect I will soon enough!.
Will you have a piece of my cake!?”Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I actually loved it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

They once interviewed my greatgrandmother who lived to be 106!. The guy asked her how she managed to live so long!? It was on her 105th birthday!. She told him on TV, " I just keep on breathin"!. Loved the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Amazing poem!. Love the dialogue!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The young and the old are priceless!. One knows not how words impacts, the other is at the age where he doesn't hide behind!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!!! The birthday boy almost scored a "dudl" then, but it would be disrespectful!. A joy to behold this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I haven't practiced stoppin' breathin' either!. That was a good one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love this one!. S2 is very well written; you have some great images there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it really good :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

you rockWww@QuestionHome@Com

Its really good!.!.!. email/ im me if u have moreWww@QuestionHome@Com