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What do you think of my poem i recently wrote!?
i honestly think its not that good and im an aspiring singer and song writer and i was wondering if this was any good!?
a moment lived is a reason to die
a question asked is a reason to lie
a time shared is a reason to care
a life wasted is a reason to be there
a wound healed is a reason to get killed
a broken heart is a reason to stay in the dark
a love found is a reason to stray to the ground
a soul dead
isn't a reason for your life to endWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's a little different!.!.!.!.!.but I like it!! Keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I can't get my head around a lot of the statements / images!. They just don't work for me I'm afraid!. What does "a love found is a reason to stray to the ground " mean!?and why would a moment lived be a reason to die!?
Sorry, this one passed me by!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
nice!.!.it sounds very original and thoughtfulWww@QuestionHome@Com
Sounds good but better to have heading and conclusion!. Not too complete!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it!.!.!.!.really how about a 4!.5/5Www@QuestionHome@Com