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Here is one for you all!. I hope you like it, let me know if you have any suggestions!. Thanks!.

Summer strolls
Among the sprouting corn stalks
Of Mother Earth's field,
As Father Sun
Reaps the soil dry!.
Summer swoons in warm
Mid-day showers!.
And she sings for
The ocean birds,
Soaring in circles
In the timeless gloom
Of the monster of the sky!.
Summer sits with
The spider webs,
Shaded beneath an aging oak!.
She is the prided maiden!.

Fall flies among
The falling colors of
Mother Earth's canvass
As Father Sun hides
Behind the breeze!.
Fall feasts with
The full Harvest Moon!.
And he forages among
Frightful field mice;
Trapped forever within
The dark beast of a forest!.
Fall frees the world from
Worrisome fears,
He is a heroic father!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i would just get rid of some words like "in,the,from, he and with"!.
sometimes you dont need it!.

example(you wrote):
Summer strolls
Among the sprouting corn stalks
Of Mother Earth's field

i redid:
Summer strolls
Among sprouting corn stalks
Of Mother Earth's field,

but besides writing to much sometimes its really good!. keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

great poem!

Seasons flying!.
How the Seasons roll
Seasons flying by
Pocketfull of sunshine
reachin' for heaven
Walking by the Seaons
A stroll through the yearWww@QuestionHome@Com

I suggest 'Earth's Canvass'!.
Another suggestion: make three or four poems out of this one!. It could be better enjoyed!. Good listings and very thoughtful!. You've got lot's of writing power here to develop into more than one poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"the melting seasons of time"
awesome poetry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! allsome!


Seasons Of Time
Seasons of Life
Seasons of the moment!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! ummmm maybe u could call it Mother Earth's Way or Father Sun and Mother Earth or something like that! hope i helped! =DWww@QuestionHome@Com


A Season Nature Hike DreamWww@QuestionHome@Com

Time of the Seasons
Coming Full CircleWww@QuestionHome@Com