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A couple of short poems i wrote in my spare time today!.!?
An apple on an apple tree,
Atop a cliff above the beach,
The skin as red as Gaelic hair,
Within my sight but out of reach
The barber’s blade lies on the ground
He dropped it there you see!.
He dropped it when he fell himself,
Right out of floor fifteenWww@QuestionHome@Com
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I agree the 1st poem is the best!. Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i dunno much about poetry, the last poems that i have read are cat in the hat (im a mom lol)!.
but is ay: u r so artistic and prolly so cute!! follow ur dream!! u could b a successful poet like tony danza (no poet, but a hottie of my eye!) :]Www@QuestionHome@Com
I really like the first!.!.!.wonderfully visual!.
I might, myself, treat a tragedy a little differently!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I can see that your poems have potential in them, you just need to work on them more!. But your on the right track!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow, very good!. Last one made me smile!.!.!. unexpected ending! Keep writing! These are great!. Great rhyming, flows well, I don't know what else to say! Wow!.!.!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow i wish i was that talentedWww@QuestionHome@Com
cool like the 2 oneWww@QuestionHome@Com
I like the first one!.!.!.continue with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
they're good!.!.!. but not shakespear good, you know!?
i wouldnt put that online though, someone could steal your workWww@QuestionHome@Com